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Comments for 'Uncertain Danger [Part 01]'



Argonox
9:16 am | June 4, 2003
It turned out a mistake once posted. It was fine when i proofed it but then something went dodgy when i put it in the form. Want happen again.Promise :)
bo2K
12:14 pm | June 3, 2003
thanks for support
Steele
9:45 pm | June 2, 2003
DO NOT, repeat DO NOT continue with the terrible spacing. How does that happen, is it the margins on your word processor? (If it is, try setting them all at 1")!

Keep up the intersting story, though.
Steele
9:41 pm | June 2, 2003
I own them both. I've read each twice.

Terrible spacing, it almost stopped me from reading it. Just proofread the darn thing, man. Otherwise it was pretty good, 9/10. Keep it up.
Argonox
2:09 pm | June 2, 2003
Cheers guys, this being my first post in fan fiction I was really worrying about it being really bad. But now i know it wasn't too bad i'll write then next installment. Cheers again.
scope
1:48 pm | June 2, 2003
One last thing, any one read the HALO books?(Fall of Reach and The flood)
scope
1:46 pm | June 2, 2003
8.2 and a half/10 Well their ya go bad spacing but I will look forward to the next installment.
Havok
12:09 am | June 2, 2003
i like where you are taking this story. i will look forward to the next installment. 8.5/10
Wiley Kimball
10:28 pm | June 1, 2003
bad spacing, but otherwise a good story. 8/10


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