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Comments for 'No Way Out: Part 3'



Awacar
9:09 am | December 22, 2003
Whoa! I really think that it's dishonoring to the author to use words such as "Good", "Great" and so on. No grades here, to good - sorry - to ... to ... (something better than the best superlatives) to put a grade on.
Sergeant B
4:00 am | December 21, 2003
That was 750 words?


Good job Arthur.
teemus
8:03 pm | December 20, 2003
Well, everything i wanted to say has already been said below. Keep it up!
Mainvent
12:40 pm | December 20, 2003
If Shirley doesn't shoot him in the head, I will be extremely annoyed by this story. Because I hate that man, I hate him with a passion.
Hawk7886
10:50 am | December 20, 2003
Wow. Wow. Err, "Wow".

*Kisses him*

10/10
Helljumper
5:42 am | December 20, 2003
just beautiful, i loved it keep it up
Agent Shade
4:41 am | December 20, 2003
*tear* you make authors like me seem like rookies *goes into a corner and cries*



oh hell, good job dude, everything that this story is has been said below
Jamirus99
2:14 am | December 20, 2003
See, an emotional connection! The mark of a good fic!
Jamirus99
8:17 pm | December 19, 2003
Here here, Steve! I'm predicting this series to have a "Crimson Tide-like" effect- a lot of moral decisions and revelations, plus a little bit of actual "happenings" to drive it along. And I like that. Alot.

Excellent stuff, Wellesly. Great to see that your hiatus from here did not diminish your writing talent.
Steve Ollett
1:59 pm | December 19, 2003
Excellent! It just goes to show that a well written piece with good dialogue and an interesting storyline can be as good as (if not better than) a piece with non-stop action.

Well Done - looking forward to the next piece!
Jaywhit10
1:50 pm | December 19, 2003
Nice work, must be cold there eh?. Gotta feel bad for the ONI personal, not much personal lives. I can't wait for the next one, nice to see theres more then one story using ONI out. Nice work, keep it up


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