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Comments for 'Legacy Part One'



spitfirekid1133
10:35 pm | April 24, 2003
NICE! i've read almost all the storys on this website, but man, urs was GOOD!
Havok
1:12 pm | April 16, 2003
yeah im gonna try to finish helljumpers. it could have been a perfect series, but i dragged it on too long. oh well...
James Kinsella
12:23 pm | April 15, 2003
Definetly a good story. I like the way you hint that facility has been far more active than we could have imagined. The facility would have to have been scanning Earth for centuries to discover the English language. I also liked how you showed that the Forerunner were Terrans. Send the next one in soon.
Steele
11:04 am | April 15, 2003
I like the message format. I give this one a 8.3/10. I'm impressed by your using the present tense of things, I always found that hard to do. Keep it up.
Knightmare(MM
4:10 am | April 15, 2003
Nothing 'hsppened' to Dispraiser, people. If anyone so much as twitches that 'indents' did something to the big D, I will personally inform him so that he can come in here and prove that he really isn't the bad guy.
monitor101
4:03 am | April 15, 2003
HAVOK! dude where the hell have you been? Well welcome back to HBO. Great story dude and are you going to finish Helljumpers?
Anonymous
12:50 am | April 15, 2003
What happened to Dispraiser?
Red
10:06 pm | April 14, 2003
After waht happened to Dispriaser I would keep your mouth shut in regards to indents... Good to see someone does though... I always considered Humans to be forerunners...
Havok
9:54 pm | April 14, 2003
you like the suspensful ending huh? the next part will be a very interesting read. i cant give anything away, but you will like it.
Dirty Commie
7:26 pm | April 14, 2003
Wow, the first guy to comment on my first story....

This was a good fic. The ending is quite the cliffhanger, and I never thought the forerunners could be of terran origin, that's pretty cool.

It's also nice that someone learned to format their stuff!!
Shadow Spartan
5:51 pm | April 14, 2003
welcome back dude, and a good story you have brought with you. You obviously enjoyed Fall of Reach, keep it up. 8.5/10
Havok
4:24 pm | April 14, 2003
yeah its good to be back! its been too long. hope you like the series.
Anonymous
4:19 pm | April 14, 2003
Helljumpers!!!!
el_halo_diablo
4:12 pm | April 14, 2003
hey hey hey! Havok, it's good to see that you're still around!


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