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Comments for 'Life Workin for HBO, Part One' |
FOrunnER
10:29 am | December 6, 2003
You should have the offices get bigger as the people compose more fanfic. Like a n00b would get 2 by 2 room. hehehe
Nice story
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stan
7:34 am | December 6, 2003
I must say the idea is good. It's original, and I can definately see some interesting stories spun off from your central theme(HBO as a big office building where we all work etc). Unfortunately the writting was not so good, and the idea's potential was squandered.
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Sterfyre36
5:26 am | December 6, 2003
Erm, what Walker said. I won't be submitting my parts for a while for ASOWE...I"ll try to get it out as soon as possible, though.
I wonder what my office looks like...:-)
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SOS.Odin
11:37 pm | December 5, 2003
thats what this place is
ive been stuck here for a while
no idea where i was
thanks for clearing it up
haha great story
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Walker
10:16 pm | December 5, 2003
Ah, finally a story about our real lives... assuming we have them. Good job, H_K, just make sure I make an appearance.
Semper Fi
-Walker
PS: Read Jason's "The Twelve Days of Halo". It's pretty good, and I'm not really much of a fan of his work, so you can know I'm being completely honest--not that I'm not honest with people I like.
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Agent Shade
9:00 pm | December 5, 2003
yeah really, ten points to Jamirus
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Jamirus99
8:14 pm | December 5, 2003
I can't read any more of this fic until I point out a glaring mistake in the first two sentences:
RING! RING! The alarm clock blared, and I moaned. It must be 6:30. A.M.
It must be? You just switched from the perfect tense to the present tense. Unacceptable. The correct sentence reads as: "It must HAVE been 6:30 A.M."
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hornet34
7:48 pm | December 5, 2003
Great change of pace fanfic. Really inventive, you should be proud of yourself for coming up with this one. Good luck and keep up the good work.
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