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Comments for 'The Defense of Earth 6; Spark's Demise' |
monitor101
6:07 pm | August 6, 2003
Hey Hawk if you think this was long you should check out Cory Lyons story Slow to Perfection man was that long.
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JCDenton
12:36 pm | August 6, 2003
at the end everything tastes like chicken but this still tastes like PORK!
haha lol good job steele 10/10
creme de la creme brotha!
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Kid Buu
12:32 pm | August 6, 2003
very nice Steele keep it up :) 10/10
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crashedwarthog
10:35 am | August 6, 2003
yeah that was odd. newayz i reckon this series kix ass. great job Steele 11/10
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Agent Shade
3:59 am | August 6, 2003
that was odd.
shut up Zulu lol
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Steele
12:59 pm | August 5, 2003
I try, Hawk, I try.
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Hawk7886
3:25 am | August 5, 2003
Man that story was long :) Why did you have the Marine shoot Sparky? He didn't even see it coming, just *Brrrrr! Szzt* No warning, nothing! Excellent story, can't wait for the next one! 10/10
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Hawk7886
3:12 am | August 5, 2003
Why the hell did it double-post? Oh, well. Comments on "The Defense of Earth 4: Ghost Ship" are here. Great story, very original. I loved the way that you seemed to kill him off as he crashed, but survived. Instead of just saying "He was surprised to see that he didn't die. He got out of his trashed cockpit-" You took the time to explain everything in relation to his crash survival. Excellent work! 10/10
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Hawk7886
2:45 am | August 5, 2003
I'm rereading the entire series as I type. I'm on "The Defense of Earth 2: The 889th Tactical Fighter Wing" story right now. I just want to comment on the story before I comment on this one. You have camptured the art of dogfighting very well in the two stories. Kudos! I can almost feel like I'm sitting in the cockpit of one of the Daggers. One of the best tactical dogfighting stories out there! "The Defense of Earth 2: The 889th Tactical Fighter Wing" gets an 11/10! Coming soon, comments on the rest of the series! Sorry for not using the story's comment section, I just wanted to get this out where people would see it.
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Hawk7886
2:45 am | August 5, 2003
I'm rereading the entire series as I type. I'm on "The Defense of Earth 2: The 889th Tactical Fighter Wing" story right now. I just want to comment on the story before I comment on this one. You have camptured the art of dogfighting very well in the two stories. Kudos! I can almost feel like I'm sitting in the cockpit of one of the Daggers. One of the best tactical dogfighting stories out there! "The Defense of Earth 2: The 889th Tactical Fighter Wing" gets an 11/10! Coming soon, comments on the rest of the series! Sorry for not using the story's comment section, I just wanted to get this out where people would see it.
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Steele
12:14 am | August 5, 2003
"When you eat chinese,
it ain't pork or chicken,
but a fat saimese."
--'Cat's in the Kettle'
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scope
7:01 pm | August 4, 2003
10/10 HAIL STEELE!!!!
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Covie Killer
6:41 pm | August 4, 2003
Hell of i know,but I really don't give a rats ass!
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Alpha Lance
6:36 pm | August 4, 2003
Linkin Park kicks ass!I love their songs.
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Covie Killer
6:00 pm | August 4, 2003
I woke up in a dream today
To the cold of static/and put my cold feet on the floor
Forgot all about yesterday
Remembering I'm pretending to be where I'm not anymore
A little tast of hypocrisy
And I'm left in the wake of the mistake/slow to react
Even though you're so close to me
You're still so distant and I can't bring you back
Sorry but thats just some lyrics from Linkin Park.
But ya'll might not care.And yes this story is KICKASS!Nice going.
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Zulu
6:00 pm | August 4, 2003
An't it eligal to duplicate songs.
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Wiley
5:06 am | August 4, 2003
yay, one of my favorite series is back! Now, if only wado would finish those eternal sunder stories...
10/10
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Alpha Lance
4:28 am | August 4, 2003
Nice,9.7/10.
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Steele
1:08 am | August 4, 2003
No, I've always been just 'Steele.' There was some retard that kept using my name a few days ago, though.
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monitor101
10:21 pm | August 3, 2003
Awesome Steele 10/10
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monitor101
10:21 pm | August 3, 2003
Hey I'm confused Steele are you Hidden Assasin or who is just wondering?
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Agent Shade
10:03 pm | August 3, 2003
no complaints, great work Steele 10/10
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