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Comments for 'Death from Above part IV: Staring Into the Face of Death' |
AlphaBravo343
1:12 am | April 25, 2003
Absolutley!, I'm going through the defense of earth from different aspects. I posted a new one last night about a high tech apache (they are jet propelled, not helicopters) squadron. I'm still not sure how many more chapters I'm going to do with this but for certain, I'm doing a Spartan chapter. And bible guy: I'm a christian, but please, this isn't the place for such talk. Let's try to stay focused in the future, mkay?
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el_halo_diablo
10:15 pm | April 24, 2003
He just thinks he's hella cool posting that stuff(kinda sad aint it?)...anyway can we be expecting more from you AB343?
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AlphaBravo343
9:30 pm | April 24, 2003
Yeah thanks guys, but really, this is about my story. So, let's keep the spamming to a minimum. And how exactly did the bible verse apply to anything here?
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bible guy
11:47 am | April 24, 2003
bible verse:
Enter your body , It cannont defile a man
because it enterethnot into his heart but, into the belly, and goeth out into the draught, purging all meats?
That which cometh out of man, that defileth the man.
For which cometh out of the heart of men proced evil thoughts,adultries, fornifacations, murders,
Thefts,convetousness, wickedness, an evil eye, blasphamy(cusing included here), pride, foolishness
All the things come from within, and defile the man.
Mark: 7, 18-23
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Dirty Commie
11:13 am | April 24, 2003
Read Armor by John Steakley
or Starship Troopers by Robert Heinlein
or Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card
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el_halo_diablo
1:51 am | April 24, 2003
Go to hell bible boy MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
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James Kinsella
12:05 am | April 24, 2003
Ummm, Yeah.
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James Kinsella
1:30 am | April 21, 2003
The good authors use a lot of description on seemingly pointless stuff to fill their pages. You can tell a good author when they keep that amount af pointless stuff the same throughout the whole story. Hope that helps in your analyzation of the books Steele recommended.
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Steele
7:55 pm | April 19, 2003
8/10 too. All you need to do in having trouble to find stuff to write about is tell the story from different points of view and tell completely what is going on and what happened. Read some really large novels by good authors and you'll see what I mean.
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AlphaBravo343
12:34 am | April 19, 2003
Sorry for the short chapters, but I really have problems finding enough to write about
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James Kinsella
8:53 pm | April 18, 2003
Pretty good. Keep it up. I've decided to start a grading scale. 8/10
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HunterKiller
5:58 pm | April 18, 2003
Nice. Thanks for using [indent]. good job 8,10
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