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Comments for 'Heaven isn't all its cracked up to be'



Cin
9:38 am | November 4, 2003
I promised you i'd remember the addy and title this time and read it and i did. I loved it- very graphic. Your style of switching mindsets is very similar to mine. I read the other two as well and you can see development which i suppose is one of the supreme objectives when you begin or at least during the early stages of writing. Anyways, let me know when you finish/post your next one, i'd love to read more of your stuff.
Mainevent
4:21 am | October 31, 2003
I'm a total idiot please kill me i admit im a teenager who insults people for fun hehe!!!
Mainevent
4:21 am | October 31, 2003
I'm a total idiot please kill me i admit im a teenager who insults people for fun hehe!!!
GLADIATRRR3000
3:04 am | October 30, 2003
wow... just plain amazing... you NEED to write more.
CovieKilla
1:48 am | October 30, 2003
My new favourite short story. Good job!
Walker
2:19 pm | October 29, 2003
Navy's the best.
AmokTheClown
2:55 am | October 29, 2003
thanx Walker, i might just do that. same Mainevent. if n e one wants to check out some of my other stories. head to www.planetavp.com, literature section. Shock troop part 1 : New meat and Shock troop part 2: Unexpected allies. i'm quiet proud of those two
AmokTheClown
2:55 am | October 29, 2003
thanx Walker, i might just do that. same Mainevent. if n e one wants to check out some of my other stories. head to www.planetavp.com, literature section. Shock troop part 1 : New meat and Shock troop part 2: Unexpected allies. i'm quiet proud of those two
Mainevent
2:42 am | October 29, 2003
Just one more reason to like clowns.
Walker
2:33 am | October 29, 2003
I want to see more from you, Amok. I want to see your writing on every post from now until never. I want you to comment on my stories, on everybody's stories. I want you to stay at HBO. I want you to write. Apparently you're good at it.

Semper Fi

-Walker
AmokTheClown
2:30 am | October 29, 2003
maybe a little more detail in your comments Ishkabibble... a little thin there. the title was not meant to be taken litterally. it simply means that heaven ain't all that great, so why go there (die). i was gonna call it "you killed my brother" in relation to the marine and the hunters' bond-brother that was killed, but i liked this title better.

thanx for the comment SOS.Odin, good to get some praise. gonna be a marine soon? cool. i might get to meet you some time. i'm a rifleman in the Australian Army. hopefully not at the business end of my steyr though
Anonymous
10:30 pm | October 28, 2003
i frickin liked it a lot...the MC almost died...great right there...but the best part is when a MARINE saves him...imma be a Marine in less than a year and i hate how some people think the Marines arent all that great...and the Marines in all the movies and videogames are so weak...like AvP and Halo...but i liked this story quite a bit...gj bruh gj...love the name ishkabibbl ahahaha
SOS.Odin
10:30 pm | October 28, 2003
forgot to put my name
Ishkabibbl
1:57 pm | October 28, 2003
Ok I suppose, but no mention of heaven, alas.


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