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Comments for 'Over The Line; Part 2' |
JediKnight114
12:56 pm | December 13, 2003
That was impressive. your military tech was dead on. i enjoyed it, too bad your not going to pick it up and run with it. really should, your doing great. in any case i hope to see more from you.
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witelancer
3:36 am | December 13, 2003
Nice job. It was definitely worth reading, and your portrayal of Marines desperately holding out against all odds was quite compelling. Also, your knowledge of Halo/military tech was impressive. I would appreciate R&R's on my stuff (ie Halo: The Recovery, The Battle for Phi Delta).
-9.5/10 (some small grammar errors)
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AmokTheClown
2:21 am | December 13, 2003
i'll see. people want me to continue, so i think i just might
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FOrunnER
4:47 pm | December 12, 2003
Wha??? But we never found out what the object was they were trying to remove.
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FOrunnER
12:40 pm | December 12, 2003
Great story man, very well written. Keep it up. 9.8/10, keep it up.
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AmokTheClown
7:03 am | December 12, 2003
kind of sad to say it but that was the series. i really shouldn't have called it a series. it was more of a two part stroy. but it was really just a bit of an experiment. from here i guess i can try a bigger series, or just more stories, eh, i'll build that bridge when i come to that river...
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Hawk7886
6:06 am | December 12, 2003
Awesome story, man. Once this series gets really big(if it does), it will be one of those that you read all at once.
11/10
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Steve Ollett
12:45 pm | December 11, 2003
Nice stuff, well written. Judging by your email address and your writing, you are familiar with military hardware.
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