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Comments for 'midnight sun (chapter 1, Moon war begins)' |
the author
5:09 am | May 29, 2004
i only remember parts of this one. I look back at it and i thought it was pretty bad, not really all that thought out, and remember, i wrote this before i read any of the HALO books, so i had no clue to wat was the life span of Cortana and that MC's age was (if i calculated right) bout in his 40's when the books were takin place.
This was not a better one of my works, no potential i think, so that is y i abandoned it. The series i have now, Hope, it right now is in part 1, and i didn't do to well wit that, writing errors, kinda crammed information, not well planned out. But i know that one has a lot of potential, i'll have it better planned out in the next and the followin chapters, so it should make more sense
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Steele
5:02 pm | July 27, 2003
Was that the Sketchfactor from all those Bungie sites or just some bozo?
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pj-NYkr90
10:48 pm | July 23, 2003
9/10 It was ok. There were minor grammatical errors but notihing to serious. Cortona would have been 'dead' by that time, but, who cares, maybe she was replicated. Jamirus, as for a battle of the moon, it's very legit. If the moon was taken in this scenario, they could bombard us theoretically with gigantic cannons or, attack our defending/retreating starships.
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Jamirus99
9:03 pm | July 23, 2003
Why do some people bother writing fan fics? Especially when Cortana would be "dead" by that time! And MC would be in his 60's or 70's! And lets not even go into the grammatical structure of this piece...*shivers*
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SketchFactor
8:35 pm | July 23, 2003
Moonwar? Come on.. how stupid is that? How about a battle for the sun! Oh no the Covenant took the sun!!
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'Nosolee
6:39 pm | July 23, 2003
Cool, 9/10, wouldn't MC be dead? I might have missed the explanation for that.
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