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Comments for 'Halo 2- The saga continues, Chptr. 2' |
Andy
7:55 pm | May 28, 2003
thanks everyone, I'll work on the grammer ;)
next one is out in a few days, trying to follow all the info that is coming out.
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telemachus
4:30 am | April 15, 2003
i agree with most of the grammat critiques, but this seriously is some of the best and most exciting fan fics i've read in a while, and i read them everyday... keep up the good work guy, i'll be looking for part III
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James Kinsella
2:56 am | April 15, 2003
Appatantly I wasn't the first to notice the grammar, but it was still a good story.
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Havok
10:51 pm | April 14, 2003
i noticed some grammar too, but the detail you put in was amazing. i was about to start a series like this, but you take the prize. you are doing much better than i could have done. keep it up.
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Shadow Spartan
5:42 pm | April 14, 2003
yeah, bit better, but a lot more grammar problems...keep trying, 7/10
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Steele
2:51 pm | April 14, 2003
'Bout like the last. A few grammatical errors, but otherwise slightly better. 7.7/10
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