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Comments for 'The Final War: Chapter Four: Battle for Installation 02 Part One: Operation: Firestorm' |
Awacar
6:20 pm | December 13, 2003
You see? It's a catastrofe for the sentence!
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Sentinel
2:55 pm | December 13, 2003
Now I understand.
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Awacar
3:44 pm | December 8, 2003
I know you've read it Sentinel, and the forgotten word gives the sentence a chance to be misunderstood.
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Sentinel
5:06 pm | December 6, 2003
Who cares if you forgot a word. All I really care about is if the story itself is good, and it is good, believe me.
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Awacar
1:59 pm | December 1, 2003
About part two, if you're afraid of bad grammar, you'll be scared to death by part two! It is the mistake I always do, to exchange have/has all the time! And I even FORGOT a word! Gaahh!
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Awacar
4:11 pm | November 30, 2003
Part two didn't make it for the stories of today! I was like half an hour late! Crap.
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Sentinel
2:55 am | November 28, 2003
Very Nice. You should keep it going.
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Mainevent
6:51 pm | November 26, 2003
Anytime.
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Awacar
3:54 pm | November 26, 2003
I'll try it. I agree about your first comment, the titles are a little bit too long. I know that the titles shouldn't be longer than the story itself. Thanks for the advises.
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Mainevent
10:34 pm | November 25, 2003
It's alright.
Try it this way.
Just put
Final War:Chapter Four(1)
then on the story itself, maybe in bold, write
Battle for Installation 02 Part One: Operation: Firestorm'
then for every new part of chapter four put a new
number in the ()'s.
That should simplify it.
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Awacar
1:20 pm | November 25, 2003
Thanks Mainevent, I appreciate advises, but I don't really know how to give a good description of the chapters/parts elseways. I promise that I'll shorten the title for chapter five, really.
Thanks.
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Mainevent
12:49 pm | November 25, 2003
That is one long fucking name dude.
LOL.
Good story, can't really complain. Keep it up. And shorten the titles.
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