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Comments for 'Its Just One of Those Days (Prologue: 05)'



Hunter_Killer
7:23 pm | September 10, 2003
Is someone spoofing you on A Series of Wierd Events? Or do I need to teach you a lesson? =(
Wado
3:27 am | September 4, 2003
Yeah that was too short, I want more.

This story actually reads more like a novel than short story. Very nice.

You probably should spell "Chief" correctly next time (Cheif in the story), but that's not nearly as bad as one fellow who mistakenly spelled it "Chef" all the time, and he did not mean to make it be funny. e.g., The Master Chef filleted the enemy...LOL.

Anyway, I need to start reading more your stuff.
Flaming_Monkey
3:23 pm | September 3, 2003
Not bad. Might've been longer, but good none the less. You should really think about writing novels.
Alpha Lance
8:58 pm | September 2, 2003
That was good. 10/10

Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy©
Mainevent
7:41 pm | September 2, 2003
Good story. Very few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes (if any), and original. Good 'nuff for me.
Hunter_Killer
7:24 pm | September 2, 2003
I like it. 10/10. =)

Oh, almost forgot. Read my Two Fan Fics: The Adventures of Lt. Jake, Part Three; and A Series of Wierd Events, Part Three!


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