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Comments for 'PART2: THE DEADLY WAR CHAPTERS 3 & 4' |
Nike
12:11 am | April 15, 2003
Yes, Zach, an excellent plot. Even I could not've thought of something like it. But I kinds have to agree with Arthur and Jamie.
Jamie, Zach has either Wordpad or Microsoft Works. I'm not sure. In fact, I'll do something productive and send in Chapter 1 of Zach's first story right now.
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GhostmouthZach
6:00 pm | April 7, 2003
Thanks Arthur Wellesly
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GhostmouthZach
6:00 pm | April 7, 2003
Thanks Arthur Wellesly
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Arthur Wellesly
2:29 pm | April 7, 2003
Hahahaha.
Mediocre story, but not truly as bad as these people say. Keep writing and you may be better in the near future.
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GhostmouthZach
12:07 pm | April 7, 2003
uh bible guy God is spelled with a capitial G!
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Bible guy
1:48 am | April 7, 2003
Did u no that every form of a cuse word is a sin against god? [indent] after every cus word u need to repent it (or Pray to get it gone) thank you and have a nice day:)
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bible guy
1:48 am | April 7, 2003
do not cus, for it is a sin against god. here me out or else pay for it in your souls...
thank you and have a nice day ;)
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el_halo_diablo
1:08 am | April 7, 2003
"Linkin Park: Meteora" is pretty damn good.
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Dispraiser
12:14 am | April 7, 2003
I read this one with instant prejudice because of the titles, I went in thinking that this may have been written by an illiterate. I was right. New paragraphs for different speakers, ect. Look at others comments, and for the love of god, has anyone here passed third grade. But since this illiteracy is common you get a C+...
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Sarge
12:00 am | April 7, 2003
I thought we got rid of HTML because of abuse?????
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James Kinsella
5:13 pm | April 6, 2003
Pseudocode:
Here's what's availble to you, formatting-wise:
Italics: To italicize a block of text, place a [i] before it and a [/i] after it.
Bold: To make text bold, place a [b] before it and a [/b] after it.
Paragraph Indent: To indent a paragraph, simply place a [indent] at the start of it. (Do NOT hit return after this code; if you do, the indent will be invisible on the line ABOVE the paragraph.)
Horizontal Rule: To place a horizontal rule in your story, simply place a [hr] on a line by itself in the location you'd like the rule to appear.
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TheRedFaction
4:59 pm | April 6, 2003
Majorly confusing. I thought the plot was excellent, but the way the sentences flow through out the story sort of kills it. I had to read it about three times in order to fully understand it. Other than that, this has serious potential.
TheRedFaction
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Ishkabibbl
1:08 am | April 6, 2003
Why did it go to a new line mid-sentance? It was sorta confusing.
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James Kinsella
1:08 am | April 6, 2003
Indent with the [indent tag. Italicise ship names with the tag,([i] xxxx [/i]). Work on the redundancy and use the spellchecker. Also have someone else look at your work(please). Oh, and new speakers require new paragraphs.
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