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Comments for 'Legacy Part Three'



el_halo_diablo
3:52 pm | April 26, 2003
hehe When it talked about destroying Covenant buildings, and constructing forerunner buildings like spires and stuff, it reminded me of starcraft lol. (my real comment on the story is on the one above)
Havok
8:26 pm | April 25, 2003
yep i forgot to italicise. the point of this series was to post my idea of what the forerunner were all about, so i had to wrap up the story quick. i actually posted this twice by accident. the full story including the ending is at the top of the fanfic list.
Steele
7:42 pm | April 25, 2003
Pretty good, 8/10. Yes, please italicize ship names and capitalize Covenant. Thus far I have only one thing to say against this series: The Army you have is just, well, it's too perfect. I mean, It'll make defeating the Covenant easy...
James Kinsella
10:42 am | April 25, 2003
The story was very good. I thought that you did a good job. Just so you know ship names are italicised. The tag is pretty simple. [i]shipname[/i]. That should do it. Keep it up!


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