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Comments for 'Legacy Part Three' |
AlphaBravo343
7:37 pm | April 30, 2003
10/10 all the way through. This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. It had solemn and glorious feeling to it. I was hoping for at least some humans to survive. This has given me an idea for the next few parts to my story.
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monitor101
7:23 pm | April 30, 2003
I'll check it out diablo and what a suprise you have friends/jk.
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el_halo_diablo
5:20 pm | April 27, 2003
Yah it's good to take a break from series once in a while.
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Havok
4:35 pm | April 27, 2003
thanks for the little story Diablo. last night was prom for my school, but prom sucks so me and my friends went out and played poker. good times. my next post will be out in another day or so. not a series, just a single story. hope you like it
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scope
11:56 am | April 27, 2003
8.5/10 Nice but this seems familar...oh well. But take this story SOMEWHERE. There is tons of ideas that u can use. Make it more intresting, u know u can.
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el_halo_diablo
4:57 am | April 27, 2003
well fi you don't mind rambling, then tonight, I went over to a friends B-day aprty, and just for fun, we hog-tied my friend up just for laughs. She started screaming for this other chick to help her, but all she did was put duct tape over her mouth. We took a picture of me and my friend giving thumbs up in front of the friend we hog-tied. We're going to upload it up to our site www.smosh.com. Ok rambling over, cant wait for the next piece of work from you Havok, good luck with your friend's band too.
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Havok
8:47 pm | April 26, 2003
hey, rambling is ok with me. as long as i get at least a few comments.
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John Morris
7:15 pm | April 26, 2003
I typed mine on a word processor at school, so gramatical errors are abound, Oh and I can take a joke, Sorry for misusing the forum also.
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el_halo_diablo
3:34 pm | April 26, 2003
Sorry for mis-using your post section Havok, any one else care to drop off a comment for this sweet series?
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el_halo_diablo
3:30 pm | April 26, 2003
Come from a family of english majors? Who cares, your punctuation and capitalization is worse than mine! :D (oh yah and the thing I said about beating the crap outta you, it was a joke. Learn to take jokes when I reply to fan fcis sometimes).
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John Morris
3:29 pm | April 26, 2003
I meant Diablo oh well
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John Morris
3:25 pm | April 26, 2003
I'm sorry, Havok, but when you come from a family of english majors, than complain. Until then, well you can just close your mouth tard, I didn't say it was bad, I said it needed work, and it does need some slight changes, or are you not that literate? (that was directed to diablo)
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el_halo_diablo
3:38 am | April 26, 2003
I'm startin to wonder if I should beat the crap outta John Morris, it's your cue Havok. ;D
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Berconius
1:57 am | April 26, 2003
Nice story. A short one... but still nice. 8/10
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James Kinsella
1:53 am | April 26, 2003
Ooops, bottom to top.(told you my eyes were wiggin out)
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James Kinsella
1:50 am | April 26, 2003
Wow, it's like one-o'clock and I'm reading this thinking, "this seems familiar, hmmm." I read the stories from top to bottom so this was the last one I read, and my eyes were about to give out and I got really confused cause I knew I read it before, and anyway, Good story.
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Havok
10:37 pm | April 25, 2003
i only said troopship four times! i know, they were all in the forst two paragraphs, but hey.
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John Morris
10:33 pm | April 25, 2003
What does it take to get a 10/10? I try my hardest, and in my opinon do as good if not better, and I'm stuck around 7,8,9/ darn it.
it the mean time 7/10 language is a bit skiddish and repative troopship,troopship, troopship, re word and re post, and you will get your 10/10 in the meantime kudos.
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Havok
9:57 pm | April 25, 2003
Diablo, thats what i said when i finished this series. but i have never once in my history of publishing stories actually finished one. i could branch off on this one in a little bit, but first i gotta post a single story and then i have a larger series to start posting. but i will probably come back to this storyline, so nobody take this idea! its copyrighted 2003 Havok Industries.
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el_halo_diablo
9:36 pm | April 25, 2003
Wow this was great, but it's a definite let-down that this was the last part, there HAS to be more to this story. Havok, think of the possibilities.
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monitor101
8:47 pm | April 25, 2003
Riveting, well written and detailed. 10/10
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Havok
8:22 pm | April 25, 2003
nope. legacy only has got three parts. i posted legacy three, and then noticed i forgot the ending. so i re-posted. i would have just posted the last part as part four, but it didnt have enough words. sorry
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Steele
8:18 pm | April 25, 2003
8/10, shouldn't this be Legacy 4?
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