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Comments for 'Unexpected Surprises Part 4' |
Jaywhit10
11:27 am | April 20, 2003
Its ok, as i told you before though when i proofread it. I like your concept but please work on grammer and spelling. Nice Work,
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me
1:12 am | April 17, 2003
i am awear of the grmmatical errors, and I'm ususally more tidey then this, so next time it will be much better, plz excuse it
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me
1:12 am | April 17, 2003
i am awear of the grmmatical errors, and I'm ususally more tidey then this, so next time it will be much better, plz excuse it
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James Kinsella
7:28 pm | April 15, 2003
It was a good concept, but it was littered with spelling and grammatical errors. I hope that you work on the next one a little harder.
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me
7:10 pm | April 15, 2003
yea i know my last post was so long ago, but i've finally gotten back online and there are more to come enjoy
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