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Comments for 'Spectral Warriors: Prolouge' |
crashedwarthog
9:18 am | December 17, 2003
THIS SUX ASS MAN GOD DAMN LEARN HOW TO WRITE!
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Lucy
4:32 am | August 30, 2003
New Comment *giggles*
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monitor101
8:17 pm | August 27, 2003
Your welcome Blade!
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12:54 am | August 27, 2003
sorry
that was me
Alpha Lance
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Whats up with that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12:54 am | August 27, 2003
9/10.
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Tango709
10:19 pm | August 26, 2003
these super-spartan fanfics are always the same. character names, callsigns, weapons, then a bit of story for part one. it's getting boring, and now i try to stay away from them. 8/10
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Khyber
10:17 pm | August 26, 2003
you're right, wellesly, they go in quotes
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Nightblade
4:44 pm | August 26, 2003
thanks monoitor101
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monitor101
4:28 pm | August 26, 2003
Pretty good Blade short but good I'm glad you included the SMG cool 9/10!
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Arthur Wellesly
11:26 am | August 26, 2003
Are you sure? With names like Thomas "Stonewall" Jackson and General "Daddy" Hill, I always see this nicknames in quotations, never once in parentheses. But as I must plead ignorance as to the official rule, basing what I said only on what I've always seen and used, I will retract my comment.
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Anonymous
3:18 am | August 26, 2003
i think that with two rocket explosions and a bunch of sniper shots, the jackels wouldve fired back, or at least turnd around...
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Steele
9:16 pm | August 25, 2003
You tell him, Arthur. But yes that was some decent action writing. Keep it up.
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Nightblade
7:39 pm | August 25, 2003
actually they are in parentheses.
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Arthur Wellesly
6:27 pm | August 25, 2003
Not a lot I can say quite yet, except some good action writing. I just got to say:
1. Careful with indent.
2. Think where you place some commas.
3. When someone has a nickname in between 2 names, it is in quotaions, not parentheses.
Otherwise, keep it up.
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