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Comments for 'Delta Squadron: Chapter Two; First Engagement'



monitor101
9:23 pm | July 28, 2003
Steele where the hell ya been? Oh grounded that sucks ass. Your story was cool! Who cares if the Seraphs have shields or not 10/10!
Steele
7:51 pm | July 28, 2003
I see no one noticed the Bourne Identity reference...
Steele
5:09 pm | July 27, 2003
*peeks out the window to see if his mom is coming, then very in-un-conspicously starts typing*

I might be back on by the end of the week, but I'll have to keep sneaking on until then.
Steele
2:42 pm | July 26, 2003
I don't know if the Seraphs have shields. It didn't say anything about them in either book. I've got three series going at once, (not to mention being grounded for no apparent reason) but I'll post sometime.
Wiley
1:21 pm | July 26, 2003
man, that sux
9/10
Hunter_Killer
5:24 pm | July 25, 2003
I like it, but don't Sapharas have sheilds? I think that only high velocoty bullets could penetrate the Plasma Sheilds on a Sahpara[I have no clue how to spell it].
But, that's just me. Great Story noetheless. 10/10.
'Nosolee
4:41 pm | July 25, 2003
Yup, you have a really good series here. Sucks that you got grounded and won't be able to submitt stories for a while, but it was great.
HinterKiller
4:28 pm | July 25, 2003
Really cool! post more when you can.
Vege7a
1:59 pm | July 25, 2003
Really cool. You accidentally called Jack Smith, John Smith, but that's a small error. Keep 'em coming! :]
pj-NYkr90
1:35 pm | July 25, 2003
Pretty good. 9.5/10
Steele
12:18 pm | July 25, 2003
I don't know when I'll be posting any more stories 'cause I just got grounded. I'm sneaking on the computer right now, but as soon as I'm able to use it agian I'll finish up my stories and post 'em.
Capo Rip
5:06 am | July 25, 2003
Is it any wonder I go to read Steele's stories first? :)


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