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Comments for 'To Kill a Mockingbird continued'



sunscorpian
2:15 pm | May 28, 2003
cool i get you thanks
saturn
4:05 am | May 21, 2003
Of all the thousands of words in the world, couldn't you have come up with a more original title? The punct. was either very shaky or done so on purpose, but I didn't like it that much. Otherwise it's satisfying overall and please remember that as a reader I only mention the bad things and often leave out compliments. Don't stop writing dude.
Havok
10:23 pm | May 20, 2003
i liked it. a break from all the action stories os good once in a while
sunscorpian
7:12 pm | May 19, 2003
thank you. i try not to write the same ol' run and gun, blow and go stories that most people write.
Scope
1:41 pm | May 19, 2003
9/10 Awwwwwwww this is such a touching story.
sunscorpian
7:59 pm | May 18, 2003
well then dont. dam, dont keep whining about it. if you dont want to read my story its your los but dont keep freaking telling me how bad the real book was.

(P.S. wiley, thanks)
el_halo_diablo
5:51 pm | May 18, 2003
I don't think I wanna ever read a fan fic with a title of a crappy book that I had to read in English class, sry.
Wiley Kimball
4:30 pm | May 18, 2003
Not bad, just capitalize character names, and Elite. 8/10


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