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Comments for 'Tides of Destruction(part 3, valley of death)'



teemus
4:05 am | December 22, 2003
Alright, thanks guys. Ill add the code to my next story.
CoLd BlooDed
1:16 am | December 22, 2003
There is also a link above the Fan Fiction Submission Form which tells you how to use it.
Awacar
8:35 pm | December 21, 2003
Oh sorry, here you'll get the pseduocode:

Making a text/part of a text bold:
Place a [b] before the text that you want to be bold and a [/b] after it. ex:
"HBO is [b]the best[/b] Halo community!"

Write a text/part of a text in italics:
Simply replace the b:s for bold into i for italics. ex:
"[i]Why is HBO the best Halo community?[/i]" I thought while writing this post.

To make a horizontal rule:
Just place a [hr] on a line of its own. If you aren't in a really big need for it, don't use extra spacing, appropriate spacing is made automaticly.

Making a paragraph indent:
Place an [indent] before the new paragraph or speaker.
Observate! [b]Don't[/b] hit return after the [indent] mark, if you do, the indent will be invisible at the line [b]above[/b] the paragraph/speaker.

At last, carefully check your previewed submission, if you've made any mistakes when writign the code, the code itself wil be visible, if you've done it right, only the effects of it will be seen.
Awacar
8:33 pm | December 21, 2003
There was a few grammar and spelling problems that even I could spot, but you've evolved and grew better since your last story. It didn't start too good, but as I read on it only grew better. Keep it up! 93%
teemus
8:32 pm | December 21, 2003
Thanks for the post, and i got no clue what the code is, would you tell me? Im always looking for ways to get better at writing.
CoLd BlooDed
5:08 pm | December 21, 2003
Pretty good, but would've been better if you used the code. Do you know what the code is?

Also you need to spell check your story to make sure there are no spelling errors or grammar problems, and I spotted quite a few. You also could've made it longer, but it was still good, can't wait for the next one. 7/10 for length


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