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Comments for 'Tides of Destruction (Part 6, Camp)' |
CoLd BlooDed
3:29 am | December 29, 2003
Shit....sorry I deleted it....but you can just copy and paste again right? Oh ya thanks for such a generous comment for my series Hawk :)
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teemus
3:11 am | December 29, 2003
whoops. I forgot i submited it. Send it to Hawk anyway and ill send the you part 8 when its done, you can add corections to that.
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teemus
3:09 am | December 29, 2003
Cold can you forward it to Hawk for me? You can add the corrections you think would fit.
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Hawk7886
2:39 am | December 29, 2003
If you want to, pass it on through me at Hawk7886@hotmail.com. I love editing stories.
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CoLd BlooDed
2:24 am | December 29, 2003
It was short, I can tell you that, and I also spotted some spelling errors and grammar problems.
Send your next one to me and I'll proofread it and fix the errors. Keep it up.
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CoLd BlooDed
2:23 am | December 29, 2003
I recieved it, and I'm reading it now...
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teemus
11:48 pm | December 28, 2003
Ahhh...this is pissing me off! Im trying to upload the story so I can send it to you but its taking so long!
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CoLd BlooDed
8:39 pm | December 28, 2003
Good stuff.
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teemus
7:54 pm | December 28, 2003
k. Ill send you the Finale, I still have to write it.
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teemus
7:54 pm | December 28, 2003
k. Ill send you the Finale, I still have to write it.
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teemus
7:54 pm | December 28, 2003
Ill send you part 7. I submitted it already so I cant make correction or anything. I wrote it at my cousins house so i had to save it to word. The version im sending you is the one without the code added
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CoLd BlooDed
12:29 pm | December 28, 2003
Yeah, feel free to send them to me when you need help or want me to check 'em over.
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CoLd BlooDed
6:36 am | December 28, 2003
For your next series you should send each chapter you complete to me so I can check it over....
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teemus
6:09 am | December 28, 2003
I have a great Finale planned for this seris. I submited part 7 today so the Finale will be part 8. Its about where the Covenant are scared that the huma...ohh youll find out.
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teemus
10:23 pm | December 27, 2003
Like i said, this story wont be up to standard. Ill send you my fics when im done writing them Cold. Im going to read your story right now.
Thanks for the post.
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CoLd BlooDed
7:43 pm | December 27, 2003
Oh yes before I forget, read my new series called "Forced Betrayal". Its a sequel to Fight for New Tatley from an Elites point of view.
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CoLd BlooDed
6:53 pm | December 27, 2003
It was good but I liked the last better, it was longer and more captivating.
I spotted some spelling errors: "Wart Hog=Warthog" "Jack hammer=Jackhammer" and also you should check up on your grammar, I saw a little bit of mistakes there.
Keep it up teemus, if you need any help on writing your stories just send them to me at sk8_4life7_@hotmail.com and I'll check them over.
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Awacar
6:33 pm | December 27, 2003
Quite good, but chapter five was better in my oppinion, more polished it seems.
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