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Comments for 'Episode 1: Old Landmarks'



Walker
1:18 pm | November 19, 2003
I usually go to word, search all the indentations, and use find to replace them all at once with [indent]. Then when I'm done I undo it for my own personal copy, and everybody's happy.

And To Unorthidox, hey, I'd probably be pissed too. Or at least dissapointed. A lot.

Semper Fi, buddy.

-Walker
The Unorhtidox Everything Man
11:33 am | November 19, 2003
Okay, i know i was out of line, Hey Walker, I'm sorry, and thanx for the codes.
Mainevent
3:26 am | November 19, 2003
I don't really care what anyone says about copy and pasting. In the first story I copy pasted indent like 100 times at least, and that it a serious pain in the ass.
CoLd BlooDed
2:51 am | November 19, 2003
I agree with Alpha, but it was a good story. Just a few queery's:

1. If the marines family was burnt to a crisp, how did the Covenant snipers kill them?

2. Also if they said that the Covenant snipers were aiming at them, why didn't they shoot?

Just asking a few questions, 8/10, remember to use the code, (indent and stuff), my questions go around the last part.
Alpha Lance
10:48 pm | November 18, 2003
Yes, this is a good story. But don't cuss Walker out. You better be glad he is helping you, 'cause he is one of the most helpful person on the site. And he is a friendly person. So don't go off and tell some one "fuck you" because someone didn't give you a perfect grade or something. You better be glade we read it. 'Cause this may be the only people to read it. So be thankful that you have atleast some fans. But that is how it is here. Welcome to HBO.
Walker
7:07 pm | November 18, 2003
Jeeze, man, an 8.899/10 is a pretty darn good score. Don't have to cuss me out. I was being nice.
Walker
7:07 pm | November 18, 2003
I mean, most people copy and paste. I do. There's a thing called pseudocode:

[indent]=indent
[i][/i]=italics
[b][/b]=bold
[hr]=page break

At least I commented on your story. That's more than anybody else bothered to do. Ungratefulness ain't a good way to debut on HBO.
The Unorthidox Everything Man
6:54 pm | November 18, 2003
Hey! Fuck you! I hope you know i copy and paste this, so its the best i could do!
Walker
1:52 pm | November 18, 2003
Questionable title.

Fairly good writing.

Intruiging plot.

But it all came crashing down at the last scene... it just didn't seem natural. For that, coupled with your eye-scarring lack of paragraph formatting, I have to give you an 8.899/10.

Semper Fi

-Walker


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